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Waterlogged (Micro Fiction)

Prompt from #microbookends @MicroBookends :

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Response:

Waterlogged

Water was the culprit, the only tool available for use. She knew her son had be struggling to cope with their situation but had she really understood him, his mentality?

She collapsed to her knees in the muddy riverbank, hands sinking in deep as she tried to breathe but it was more like hyperventilation. Her sobs and wails could be heard only in her atmosphere, no one knew the pain she was suffering right now. She felt the overwhelming compulsion to join him. The only reason she braved being strong in this hell of an incarceration camp was for her 12 year old son who was now at heaven’s gate.

(110)

2 comments on “Waterlogged (Micro Fiction)

  1. Pingback: Writing Page is Official | The Extraordinary Adventures of Tashina in NYC

  2. lincahceria5
    February 11, 2015

    It’s short but you put enough emotion and setting explanation.
    Next time, try to write a micro fiction with dialogue in it.

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